The reading article and the lecture both about asteroids. which is a large space object made up of rock and the ice. The author of the reading believes that colonization on the asteroids is the best options and provide three reasons to support. The lecture cast doubt on the clime made in the article. He thinks that it is not possible practically and he refutes each of the author's opinions.
First of all, the author points out that Since the asteroids are the smaller plant then the moon, it has a less gravitational force. It is mentioned that the less gravitational force is a safer place to land spaceship because it is not pulled forcefully. This point is challenged by the lecturer. he says that although the landing and take off is easy, overall it is a risk for the colonist. Furthermore, he argues that the less gravity reduces the muscle mass and the bone density and it also creates health issues for the people.
Second, The author contended that it is the best place for mining. The article notes that mining the valuable metals limited on the earth is a profitable business. The professor rebuts this argument. He suggested that it seems profitable but not as a whole. He elaborates on this by mentioning that they need to spend money on transportation as well as cost to support mining. On top of that, once the supply increase the demand went down and end up with the loss.
Finally, the author states that it is easy to reach asteroid compared to the moon because it is a close orbit to the earth. The lecture, on the other hand, posits that even though it is easy to reach, it is hard to return. He put forth the idea that the earth orbit is not stable while returning it move away from the asteroid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e and the lecture both about asteroids. which is a large space object made up of rock...
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Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...is point is challenged by the lecturer. he says that although the landing and take...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'moves'?
Suggestion: moves
... orbit is not stable while returning it move away from the asteroid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, second, so, then, well, while, as well as, first of all, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53205128205 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47551288359 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6582337996 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4210526316 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11755942012 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330844562487 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766235632919 0.0662205650399 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688491622651 0.162205337803 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654773432315 0.0443174109184 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.2367328918 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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