the reasons support a coin found in Canada is fake or not

Essay topics:

the reasons support a coin found in Canada is fake or not

The text discusses this possibility that the Coins found in the United states be a fake and provides three reasons of support. On the other hand, the professor refutes all stated claims and explains that there are some evidences which can prove the coin is not fake.

First, the text explains that based on the great distance between Maine where the coin discovers and the settlements of the Norse can prove why discovered coin is not original. The professor refutes this claim and states that it is proved that the native people of America used to travel in long distances and took some objects with themselves. She also states that these people could really reach long distances and brought the coin to that place.

Second, the text claims that no other coin found in Canada where the Norse inhabited there. So, the found coin is not original. The professor rejects this point and states that the Norse had no permanent settlements. She also adds that a reason which can explain why no other coin found in that place due to this point that maybe The Norse packed up all their tools but not their coins. In this way she refutes the second claim of the text.

Third, as the text coins were popular in Europe, but they had no use in North America. By mentioning this point, it explains why the coin in Canada is a fake version. The professor goes against this point and states that although the people of the North America did not used to count silver coins as money, but it was appealing for them because of its beauty. We can also hear from her that the people of the North America could use these coins as jewelry. In this way she states why she believe the third claim of the text is wrong.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...the people of the North America did not used to count silver coins as money, but it ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...jewelry. In this way she states why she believe the third claim of the text is wrong. ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, really, second, so, third, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 270.72406181 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52922077922 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08813187748 2.5805825403 81% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444805194805 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8395268543 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278605530543 0.272083759551 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114879893772 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11559290094 0.0662205650399 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193008896232 0.162205337803 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100297486997 0.0443174109184 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.42419426049 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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