resolution of salt water
The lecture and reading both discuss the ways to resolve the problem of the salinity water in the Salton Sea in California. While the reading states that there are three ways to resolve this problem, the lecture refutes this, saying that these suggestions are not effective in resolving this problem.
First of all, the passage states that one of the solutions is to use special desalination facilities. This device can pump out the water to be evaporated into the stream and leave behind the salt and other dissolved material in the water. Through this technique, health could be improved by decreasing the level of salt in this lake. However, the professor rejects this claim and mentions that although this technique seems to be effective in decreasing salt’s level in the water. It also indicates a serious problem that could be added to the previous one which is adding toxic chemical materials like solanum. These types of toxic chemical materials are harmful and dangerous for humans who breathe it in the air.
In addition, the reading includes that other ways to reduce salt’s level in water are by adding ocean water to this lake by pipelines or canals. Furthermore, the salt’s level in the Pacific Ocean is about 20 percent less than the lake. Therefore, by transferring the ocean’s water through pipelines and canals will help to control the salinity in the lake. On the other hand, the lecture opposes this claim and includes that this idea is difficult to be achieved because the local government does not have enough resources to support these kinds of projects. Additionally, the nearest shore is about hundred kilometers away from the Pacific Ocean. Which is a long distance to be supported by these pipelines or canals.
Lastly, the passage proposes that another way to control this salinity is by constricting walls to separate the lake into several sections. The salt level will be allowed to increase in the smallest section, while in the largest section salinity could be controlled by adding more freshwater from small rivers. In contraction, the lecture rejects this claim and states that this idea could not be used for the long term because of the frequent and intensive geologic activity in this area. She adds that these walls could be collapsed in one of the major earth quicks and the high salinity water will be mixed with low salinity water.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...dditionally, the nearest shore is about hundred kilometers away from the Pacific Ocean....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, while, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 30.3222958057 198% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1373.03311258 145% => OK
No of words: 400.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9825 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50094857004 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 419.366225166 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7343090074 49.2860985944 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.722222222 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177325153582 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708139439551 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876862413501 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118652919564 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543510301863 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.3589403974 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 63.6247240618 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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