which one better, using one source to get the information o more than one?
In today's progressive and sophisticated world we live in, no one can turn a blind eye to the significant effects of various news sources on people's life. we can find two categories, some of them may prefer to depend on one source of information while on the extreme end of the rope, we may find the opposite aspect. In another word, they may prefer to search in different resources to get the correct idea. from my perspective, the opponent idea looks rational and in the following article, I will elaborate on my point of view cogently.
The first to exquisite point to be mentioned is the accuracy we need while we are learning this information. In the modern era with the invention of the internet and other social media, we can easily find all the information we want but the important question is it all accurate and we can rely on it or not? The answer is no, and let me take a personal experience as an example to illustrate what I mean. In 2008, the year of my graduation from a college of dentistry in Iraq. One of the graduation requirements they need is research to show the relation between food frequency intake and caries index in children. In addition to the books, One of the resources I used to collect the information and results of surveys is online websites. Fortunately, before I submit my research while I am digging in books. I found some of the basic details are wrong, Therefore, I reviewed all the pages depending on recommended books only.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is the cost. Recently, we all noticed that when we are using the internet or youtube, these websites offer us a free week or month trial and then we have to pay for it to be opened and we can use it when we want. On the other hand, books are free, we can easily have a free membership with any near local library or we can depend on the library of the university to pull out any book we want for free. Besides that, these libraries sometimes offer a free login to a recommended website.
To wrap it up, all the after-mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that books are the most recommended resources for all generations. Because with all the new technology inventions, approaching the information has become easy. But, at the same time, it may not be correct. Therefore, we need to know how to use these techniques in a proper way to achieve our goals not to be distracted and disguise with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, while, i mean, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62642369021 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7646214535 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521640091116 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2277688529 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.55 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122285018204 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398508576684 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646213715631 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810572401301 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583374807203 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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