silver coin

Essay topics:

silver coin

According to the reading, many people believed that European explores known as the Norse could bring silver coins used in Europe when they tour the North American, but there are some archaeologists who thought that the coin is a forgery. The author in the reading said that the coin is not real historical evidence. However, the professor in the listening gives several reasons as a rebuttal on the author's point.

First of all, the author in the reading contends that the Native American site in Maine where the coin was found is placed in the distance from other sites documenting a Norse presence in North America. The author in the reading said that the Maine site and the Norse settlements are more than thousands of kilometers. However, at that time, since Europeans who brought the coin traveled to many places, there is a lot of evidence as well as coins. Also, many sites are far from the place. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the coins that were not reaching from the place support that they are no connection with the settlements.

Second, the professor in the listening argues that it is not true that there are no other coins at the Canadian sites. The reading said that Norse did not bring any silver coins with them to the settlement based on the non-existence of other coins in the place. However, it is a story for Europeans to trip with the coin and take them together when they return to their hometown. This counters the reading passage's claim that it is untrue that what other coins were not discovered at the sites espouses that Norse did not conduct silver coins with them to the place.

Lastly, the professor in the listening insists that it is an absurd claim that the Norse would have comprehended that silver coins would be futile to them. The reading said that experienced explores among them would have realized that native North American did not accept the coins as money. However, even though the Americans did not admit them as money since they like beautiful things such as jewelry, the coins are valuable in the place. This refutes the reading passage's claim

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Average: 6.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, well, such as, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 25.0 12.0772626932 207% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 369.0 270.72406181 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78590785908 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32241891145 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428184281843 0.540411800872 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.512703227 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36233677823 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132878871662 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114642780954 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258198781033 0.162205337803 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10101157803 0.0443174109184 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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