summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubts on specific points made in the reading passage

Grammar and spelling errors:
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in the reading passage three reasons about...
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...nal combustion engine associated to cars were stated in order to indicate that re...
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...rogen-based fuel will be more profitable,while in the listening section lecturer argue...
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...stated in the reading may not be correct,and also mentioned other contradictory idea...
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...o mentioned other contradictory ideas. according to the reading passage,three reasons pr...
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...ideas. according to the reading passage,three reasons prove that applying hydrogen-b...
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... the reading passage,three reasons prove that applying hydrogen-based fuel can be...
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...an internal-combustion engines.the first,because internal-combustion engine relies on pe...
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...al-combustion engine relies on petroleum,which is infinite resource,some day we will r...
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... on petroleum,which is infinite resource,some day we will ran out of oil,while hydrog...
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...h is infinite resource,some day we will ran out of oil,while hydrogen needed for fu...
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...resource,some day we will ran out of oil,while hydrogen needed for fuel-cell engines c...
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...es can not be depleted easily.the second,hydrogen-based fuel cells may solve many pollution pro...
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...e many pollution problems.in other words,because the only byproduct of hydrogen-based fu...
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...yproduct of hydrogen-based fuel is water,it will not pollute the enviroment.the thi...
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...ically in case of spending less money. while in the listening section,speaker pointe...
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...s money. while in the listening section,speaker pointed out that although details in t...
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...stening section,speaker pointed out that although details in the reading passage...
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...ointed out that although details in the reading passage is correct,but it has so...
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...tails in the reading passage is correct,but it has some problems.the first,hydrogen...
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...rrect,but it has some problems.the first,hydrogen-based fuel is not a good solution,because hyd...
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...drogen-based fuel is not a good solution,because hydrogen is not easily available.to cla...
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...rogen is not easily available.to clarify,it is not directly available because it re...
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...le because it requires pure liquid state,which is difficult to obtain and requires sop...
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...ich is difficult to obtain and requires sophisticated cooling technology.the second,hydrogen-...
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...ot solve the pollution problems.moreover,it is necessary to have purified hydrogen,...
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...latinium in order to produce electricity,and paltinium is expensive material.while o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, while, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44206008584 5.08290768461 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.3272445724 2.5805825403 168% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.55342163355 129% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 1.25165562914 719% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 21.2450331126 362% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.583840119 49.2860985944 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 500.333333333 110.228320801 454% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.6666666667 21.698381199 358% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6666666667 7.06452816374 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 4.19205298013 787% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0706624681659 0.272083759551 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586418042343 0.0996497079465 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027406076142 0.0662205650399 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586418042343 0.162205337803 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027406076142 0.0443174109184 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.7 13.3589403974 357% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -40.52 53.8541721854 -75% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 5.55761589404 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 11.0289183223 345% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 21.26 12.2367328918 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.35 8.42419426049 158% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 63.6247240618 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 10.7273730684 294% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.498013245 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.2008830022 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:

para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3

Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).

Don't need a conclusion paragraph.

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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