TOEFL TPO 07- Integrated Writing Task
The passage describes the imprtance of a certification that provides high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling materials. The passage adds that American companies are reluctant to get these certifications for three reasons. However, the talk refutes all these reasons by stating that people in the United States are eager about these certifications. Consequncely, the professor provides three reasons for supporting his idea.
First, the reading asserts that American users are exposed to so much advertsments and it is difficult to notic them. While the professir in the conversation explains that people can easily distinguish the differences between the adverticment. So, the professor thinks the mentioned reason in the talk is not convincing and using adverticment is an effective way to introduce our unique products.
Second, the passage claims that wood with ecocertified sign has too much cost. So, it is less practical that concumers buy these expensive products. However, the lecture refutes this idea by stating that price is one of the important factors that people pay attention to them when they buy a product. If the difference between the price of the two products is lower than 5 percents they notice to other factors like having ecocertification. Furthermore, the professor says there are many people in America that believe concuming ecocertificated products is better for the environment. So, they buy the expensive one with ecocertification logo.
Third, the text asserts that following certification is matter when they want export their products to abroad not when they want sell their products in their own country. However, the teacher rejects this idea bt describing that by ignoring this subject they can loose their market. Because other companies in forieign countries can enhance their products by obtaining ecosertification sign and they can enter to America and occupy the market. It can devastete the domestic companies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ents and it is difficult to notic them. While the professir in the conversation expla...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ention to them when they buy a product. If the difference between the price of the...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... that by ignoring this subject they can loose their market. Because other companies i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1373.03311258 122% => OK
No of words: 305.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49180327869 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07609136424 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7560004626 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5294117647 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315202837329 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867729137521 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557474257385 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157588643103 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056812908355 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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