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The reading state the medical staff have been recorded patient’s information on the paper. However, if they will use an electronic medical record system, it will have several advantages.
Although when the medical stuff uses the electronic record system instead of papers, the professor, disputes that, most of the doctors don’t throw the patients’ information for legal reasons, so they will still be paying for storage to keep it for emergency case.
Even though doctors use an electronic system to reduce misunderstanding handwriting and medical errors, the lecture argues that, because they will still use paper in examination by taking notes and write prescriptions by their hand and then office staff inter information to the computers, so poor hand writing and misunderstanding still there are.
Finally, electronic record system assists medical research to gather and collect a large amount of data from patient’s record. The professor, disagrees that, medical researchers have difficulty access to information and use it, because the US has strict privacy laws for patient’s data. If researcher wants to use this information, they must follow restrict and complicated procedure and permissions and some permissions not granted because it can be blocked.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 30.3222958057 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 194.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71649484536 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13076760773 2.5805825403 121% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8291476884 49.2860985944 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.428571429 110.228320801 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.3589403974 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.2367328918 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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