Torreya Taxifolia tree decline and migration

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Torreya Taxifolia tree decline and migration

The speaker in the lecture states that none of the solutions mentioned in the passage regarding preservation of Torreya tree are viable. This is because of the following reasons.
First, according to the speaker the solution of the microclimate mentioned in the passage will not work because of the change in the climate conditions due to global warming. The larger warm and dry regions are affecting the smaller wet and cooler lands of Florida. This is causing the changes in the microclimate of northern Florida and turning it into dry and warm land. This will not help in the growth of the Torreya plant and the decline in its population will continue.
Second, the speaker suggests that migrating the Torreya Taxifolia plant to distant northern region is not a good option either. She cites the example of the Black Locust Tree in which it was migrated to a different region. This migration caused the decline of another endangered plant as it was not used to having the Black Locust Tree in its surrounding. The speaker says that migration can result in unforseen and unwanted events so can not be the solution either to prevent the decline of the Torreya tree.
Thirdly, the speaker mentions that moving the Torreya plant to the research center will not help in saving the plant either in the long run. As, for a plant or tree to survive it needs a defense mechanism to prevent itself from the diseases. She says that such defense mechanism can only be developed when the tree grows and develops completely and naturally in the wild and not in the research centers. The plants grown in the research centers can be weak and may not be able to defend themselves against various diseases in the wild. Therefore, this is also not a good option.
Thus, the speaker cites the above three examples and discards the solutions mentioned in the passage. According to the speaker none of the solution can help in preventing the decline of the Torreya Taxifolia tree.

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Average: 9.1 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 339.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7994100295 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49540087398 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445427728614 0.540411800872 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4321809428 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7058823529 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324305932132 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10408090888 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116908463916 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188925030484 0.162205337803 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138369211924 0.0443174109184 312% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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