The benefits explained in the passage have been ruled out by the lecturer completely by stating that the benefits of hiring part time workers will be out weighted by its drawbacks.
Firstly, the passage states that overall company will make a financial gain by hiring employees on part time basis based on the US law of hiring them at 80% of the normal pay. This will be cost effective because lesser pay results is higher gains. However, the lecturer state that this will instead be a costly decision because companies will need to spend more on hiring, training and medical insurance. Also, for increased number of employees, more space and computers will be required resulting in increased expenses and lesser profit.
Secondly, the passage supports part time hiring more than the regular hiring by emphasizing on unemployment rates that they will decrease because working for a shorter period of time will make work available for others. But again lecturer refute this claim by saying that since employees will be required to work only for 4 hours every day for 5 days and they will only get 80% of the regular pay may not cover all of their expenses and eventually, this will require them to find more work resulting in further unemployment as there may be few or no opportunity available.
Thirdly, passage states that working for a short time period will make work interesting, lesser errors will be made as the employees get full rest and will be motivated to work efficiently resulting in reduction of workload for all. But the lecturer disagrees to this by saying that this could easily be achieved if full time employees work overtime.
Lastly, the passage states that employees will be able to spend quality time with their families more if they work part time. However, the lecturer says that this will also lead to lesser career advancement opportunities, reduced stability at work and if there is a down turn in the economy then part time employees are the first ones to lose their jobs. And this leads to no job security
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... by stating that the benefits of hiring part time workers will be out weighted by its dra...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...a financial gain by hiring employees on part time basis based on the US law of hiring the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ofit. Secondly, the passage supports part time hiring more than the regular hiring by ...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... decrease because working for a shorter period of time will make work available for others. Bu...
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Line 7, column 317, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...g that this could easily be achieved if full time employees work overtime. Lastly, the...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e with their families more if they work part time. However, the lecturer says that this w...
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Line 9, column 297, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...here is a down turn in the economy then part time employees are the first ones to lose th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... jobs. And this leads to no job security
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 5.04856512141 396% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 349.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87679083095 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49028951314 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481375358166 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 419.366225166 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.5175532967 49.2860985944 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.833333333 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 21.698381199 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348462756208 0.272083759551 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151370527513 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728849321312 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216823666811 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081319346946 0.0443174109184 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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