Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information, others think so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
Nowadays, people depend extensively on the usage of internet. At work, universities and even at home. Internet is widely being used mainly for the vast information that it comes with and because this information is only a click away, people tend to resolve their issues immediately.
The main source of obtaining information through internet is by typing it on google. Google brings answers to everything. At first people used to type the topic they want information about and it used to be available in a matter of seconds, free of cost. Now, there are other sources present too like yahoo and not to forget YouTube. For example, when I moved to State to study, I had no idea how to cook food because back in the home country my mother used to do all the cooking. So I was extremely worried as who will teach me to make our traditional food. I immediately typed it on google that 'how to make biryani, Pakistani style' and the complete recipe appeared on google right away. Not only this but there was a tutorial video present on YouTube too that I can watch and learn from totally free.
Internet can help in numerous ways. It also provides information relating to different study topics like written essays and if somebody need help in writing an essay or presentation, that help is also available from Edubird.com. This is extremely helpful in keeping up with good grade at school and universities however, this may also damage the creative side of a person. Reliance on such sites for assignments that require creative thinking may make students accustomed to not use their thinking instead rely on others to do their work. Therefore, many universities and schools have software that catch plagiarism that is identifying whether a particular assignment is copied online. This is another benefit of using internet that because of its vast usage, people thought that plagiarism might take place and therefore, developed such software to prevent them.
Internet is also useful for finding out information about certain medication a person is prescribed. That is, getting to know its side effects and internet also provides doctor services online. That is right, there are some website that ask an individual about the illness that he is having and provide suggestion on generic medication or recommends a diet plan to follow until better. These kind of online help are mostly free. However, these sites only suggest to a point when a person is not going through serious illness and can be easily resolved by following a diet plan instead of antibiotics.
Back in the old days people used to depend on printed maps for navigation issues. However, since the internet is advanced in so many ways that provides us the benefit of GPS. GPS works through internet and life has not been easier before GPS invention. It not only guides us throughout the way but also provides information on upcoming traffics or weather changes. All this was only possible by watching weather news or by travelling with maps everywhere.
As for the conclusion, internet keeps on impacting our lives with greater benefits and inventions such as the use of Siri, Alexa, storage drives such as icloud and google drive and various online softwares such as salesforce that maintains customer and business data online and can be accessible from any location by just the use of a password and ID. However, security systems must be placed on its usage to prevent the data from being stolen because since there is an increase in the use of internet, also resulted in the rise of cyber crimes such as hacking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'websites'?
Suggestion: websites
...s online. That is right, there are some website that ask an individual about the illnes...
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Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...nds a diet plan to follow until better. These kind of online help are mostly free. However...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, as for, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2983.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 608.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61093827577 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 212.727598566 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 961.2 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1150224609 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.862068966 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9655172414 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31034482759 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182632549003 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461864681645 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373645992292 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101532668861 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329900653775 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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