The reading states that there is controversy in the accuracy of Chevalier written memoir and provide three reasons of support. However, the lecturer explains that everything written in there is a reliable source of history and refutes each of the author’s reasons.
First of all, the passage claims that it is doubtful that Chevalier is rich since he borrowed money while living in Switzerland. On the other hand, the lecturer says that he is indeed a wealthy person and there is reason why he need to loan for penny. In order to have the large sum of money, he must first sell his properties and the payment may take couple of days or so to complete, thus to fund his gambling he borrowed money while waiting.
Second, the article posits that the preciseness of Chevalier’s conversation with Soltaire is questionable saying that it is impossible to remember every phrase. In contrast, the lecturer states that Chevalier has his own journal where he wrote down everything said for each discussion he had with Soltaire. He kept and used the diary as a reference, moreover he even seek for writer’s opinion regarding the composition of his memoir.
Third, the reading discussed that Chevalier escape from Venice’s prison is merely due to bribery and not because he escaped using a piece of metal. The lecturer opposes this by saying that bribe is impossible inside the since there are numerous of prisons who are more powerful and have strong connections yet was not able to escape from there. Furthermore, the ceiling of his cell has damage after he got to run from the prison. Repair would not be needed if he did not escape the way he told it.
In conclusion, the reason why in need to loan, the kept journal of all the conversation with Soltaire and the wrecked ceiling inside his cell are the main reasons why the lecturer claims that Chevalier’s autobiography contains accurate information about his life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'seeks'.
Suggestion: seeks
... diary as a reference, moreover he even seek for writer's opinion regarding the...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e inside the since there are numerous of prisons who are more powerful and have s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, third, thus, while, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94801223242 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8056633214 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2958704177 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06452816374 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380262848081 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138294877016 0.0996497079465 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520851583911 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201869013929 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500654841888 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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