TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for

The reading and the speaker discuss the decline of the rate of young people reading literature books from different perspectives. The speaker negates all the ideas has mentioned in the article.
First of all, the author of the reading points out that today young people rarely read literature books. By reading less literature books they miss out a lot of important benefits. This point is challenged by the speaker. He restates the fact that even though people today do not read literature books as they did in the past, they love to read other books, such as science and history books. Those books are highly quality and help people to create and increase the ability of imagination as well. Do not assume that only literature books benefit people.
Secondly, the author of the reading contends that watching movies and listening to music has lowered the level of culture in general. The speaker rebuts this argument by saying that culture has changed many forms. Watching brilliant movies and listening to enjoyable music are ways to develop culture as well.
Finally, the author of the reading states that there are many talented writers, but they lack of audience. The speaker, on the other hand, opposes this point by saying that do not quickly make conclusion. In fact the writers today seem to write the stories that are difficult for readers to understand. Therefore, people tend to read the books, which were written in the past than the books are written today.

Votes
Average: 6.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, therefore, well, in fact, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93574297189 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35220715541 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510040160643 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4345881687 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9333333333 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428023372272 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146275482907 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111761670386 0.0662205650399 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247178935786 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915070760944 0.0443174109184 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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