The reading and the lecture are both discussing a painting of a teenage girl. The author believes that girl in the painting is Jane Austin. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks that the provided arguments cannot prove that statement.
First of all, the author point out the Austin family itself thinks that the girl in the portrait is Jane, as they gave the permission to publish it in an edition of her letters. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that the family members who claim that the teenager is Jane Austin have never actually seen her, so they do not know how she looked.
Secondly, the author contends that the face in the portrait is very similar to the one in Cassandra Austins sketch, which depicts Jane. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He says that although the features are similar, it does not prove that it was Jane Austin. He adds that it could be a painting of her cousin or one of her relevant, as the women in Austin family looked alike.
Finally, the author states that the painting was attributed to Ozias James, who worked exactly at the time when Jane was a teenage girl. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that stamp on the back of the paintings cloth shows that it was sold by a man named Willem Leg in London when Jane was in the age of 27. So, the teenager cannot be her in the portrait.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at girl in the painting is Jane Austin. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'paintings'' or 'painting's'?
Suggestion: paintings'; painting's
...d, posits that stamp on the back of the paintings cloth shows that it was sold by a man n...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, look, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47035573123 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21334697721 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5166995349 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7857142857 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286047879241 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997942328596 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712133860025 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176084414693 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451167431097 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 12.2367328918 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.