TPO 14
The reading suggests a salvage logging method is a practical and beneficial method for removing the injured trees after a forest fire. However, the professor casts doubt on this method and believes that it causes serious damages.
First, based on the passage, the burned forest is chocked with dead trees. These dead trees do not let new tree to grow since it takes a lot of time to decompose. Therefore, salvage logging is an excellent method that makes room for fresh trees. In contrast, the professor states that cleaning up the dead trees is not the right method for helping new trees. The new trees need nutrients which can be provided by the decomposing old or burned tree. Therefore, it is pluasible that removing trees cause lack of nutrients in future for new trees because we do not let them to decompose.
Second, according to the passage, dead trees not only take space but also, are suitable habitat for insects such as spruce bark beetle. Removing dead trees by salvage logging removes these insects. Therefore, they can not harm health of the forest. Nevertheless, the author asserts that the existence of these insects is not very dangerous for forests. There are numerous other harmful insects in forests but, there are other animals like birds that consume these harmful insects. Therefore, Salvage logging has more harmfull effects compare to these insects on the forests.
Third, the reading specifies that salvage logging has plenty of economic benefits. It produces additional jobs for residence and also, industries can use the wood of damage tree by natural disasters which may help the economy. On the contrary, the professor explains that it is true that this method makes additional jobs but these jobs are temporary and do not last long enough for people. In addition, we have to consider that locating these woods need experts to use vehicles like helicopters which residence can not do it. So, it makes job opportunites for outsiders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, in addition, in contrast, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 328.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03658536585 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46183691326 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506097560976 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6784044339 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9473684211 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533686920656 0.272083759551 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164247097465 0.0996497079465 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709318410996 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306345406568 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539351393971 0.0443174109184 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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