Both the reading and the lecture are about methods for stopping spread of large animal The cane toad. The writer states three methods for destroy these animals in Australia and gives reasons for usability of these methods. However, the professor explains that there are problems with his methods. The professor states the methods of author more likely be unsuccessful and it will damage to nature.
First, the reading proposes national fence method. The professor refutes this point. He states it will not stop. He states stream water way will carry the eggs of these animals to other side.
Second, the author claims that the people can capture these toads and destroy their eggs. The professor says that this idea could be successful. However, untrained volunteer people can not identify whether the animals its frog or the toad. So, these people can kill some types of endangered frogs. He states this method is harmful for the environment.
Third, the writer states that virus can usable which is specially builded by scientists. The professor cats doubt onto this claim by stating it is a bad idea and it would have terrible consequences. He states, this special virus can be carried by scientist and collectors to home of the toads which is South America. So, this virus can kill toads even in their home. This is ecological disaster.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sequences. He states, this special virus can be carried by scientist and collecto...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3431792268 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551111111111 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7250777444 49.2860985944 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 110.228320801 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5 21.698381199 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 7.06452816374 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269698620388 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868813079984 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666783976879 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163767092495 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342153601382 0.0443174109184 77% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.3589403974 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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