The reading claims that, in 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida , started to die, and it provides three ways to address the decline of Torreya. Conversely the professor casts doubts on what has mentioned in the reading, and he refutes each claim in the reading.
First, the reading states that, reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousand of years. it used to be in N Florida , and it has a speciefic microclimate. But the professor dosn't agree , and he says that, that is unlikely to be successful solution because the area affects by change of the climate in the region. The global warming increases temperature in Florida, so the wetlands will dry , and many areas will be dried. In addition, Torreya cannot live any where without their origion place.
Second, the reading argues that, second option is to move Torreya to a different location such as in forests further north. Yet, the professor doesn't agree , and he says that, Black trees were moved to a new environment in the North. The result was that, the spreading of Black trees lead to kill other trees in the environment, and the trees become in danger of being extinct.
Third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers. However the professor doesn't agree, and he says that, research centers are probably not a solution either. Torreya in such center will not protect from disease , and in order to survive disease it needs to be large and generation diverse. Research center doesn't have the capacity to keep large trees and diverst population. Moreover Torreya will not capable to survive diseases for long time.
the reading states that, reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousand of years.
Description: what is the subject for 'reestablish'?
that is unlikely to be successful solution
that is unlikely to be a successful solution
the spreading of Black trees lead to kill
the spreading of Black trees leads to kill
Third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers.
the Third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers.
Moreover Torreya will not capable to survive
Moreover Torreya will not be capable to survive
Sentence: Torreya in such center will not protect from disease , and in order to survive disease it needs to be large and generation diverse.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to generation and diverse
Sentence: First, the reading states that, reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousand of years. it used to be in N Florida , and it has a speciefic microclimate.
Error: speciefic Suggestion: specific
Sentence: In addition, Torreya cannot live any where without their origion place.
Error: origion Suggestion: origin
Sentence: Research center doesn't have the capacity to keep large trees and diverst population.
Error: diverst Suggestion: divers
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 288 250
No. of Characters: 1338 1200
No. of Different Words: 153 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.646 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.408 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.651 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4