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TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task

The reading claims that Torreya is one of the evergreen trees which are extinction in the states of Florida. The author elaborates his viewpoints by providing three main reasons to maintain the Torreya from extinction. Nevertheless, the professor believes that none of the providing solutions are satisfied and refutes each of the author's concepts.

First, the reading asserts that reestablishing option of these trees in the same location and states that Northern Florida as the best location for favorable microclimate. However, the professor refutes this view by stating that it's unlikely to become successful; hence, global warming alters this area remarkably warmer than 1000 years ago. Since these trees require cold and damp area, she indicates that drier weather in this area is becoming widespread as the cause of the less surviving in the environment.

Furthermore, the article avers that move Torreya trees to a different location which similar to ancient period and microclimate of trees. On the other hand, the professor brings the fact that significant changes could be harmful to the entire ecosystem. She states example of black Yoko trees as the negative experience; hence, it spread so quickly on different areas by scientist and impose other plants to extended and numerous negative consequence which cause by mentioned trees.

Finally, the article posits that preserving Torreya in lab and research center in order to maintain this kind. On the contrary, the professor casts doubt on this claim by stating that it not a perfect solution since these trees not able to resist the disease if it plants in the artificial environment. In addition, states that large areas and diversity as two essential requirements for these trees which can not afford by research centers. Not sufficient capacity and variety are the cause that these trees will not survive from the disease.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, in addition, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 1373.03311258 191% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 7.63953488372 5.08290768461 150% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.01538204831 2.5805825403 233% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 419.366225166 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.55342163355 129% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5879825795 49.2860985944 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.153846154 110.228320801 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702230146155 0.272083759551 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550206675162 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031223011732 0.0662205650399 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633584406497 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105350056764 0.0443174109184 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.3589403974 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 53.8541721854 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.2 11.0289183223 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 27.33 12.2367328918 223% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 63.6247240618 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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