TPO 29
The reading claims that Edomontosaurus would migrate in the winter at the North Slope since it was several months of total darkness in the region. The author's elaborates his viewpoints by providing three main reasons. Nevertheless, the professor believes that they are not convincing and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article asserts that their diet suppurt migration since they need to obtain plants in the winter to survive. However, the professor refutes the concept by stating that about 1 million years ago the weather was warmer than today, as well 24 hours sunshine in pick of the summer provide considerable growing plants; hence, in the winter lots of the notronios plants peresnt and they did not need to migrate and comfortably lived in the dead earth.
Furthermore, the article avers that there were some evidence like skeletons which indicate that they lived in the herd. So, moving in the herds helps animal coordinate their migrate as some today animals. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up the fact that living in the herds have another meaning too, such as, protecting them from danger and predator. In addition, she states that kind of the Elk which lives in the western U.S and mentioned that they live in herds only because of the protect and do not migrate.
Finally, the article posits that Edmonotsaurs had capble of migerate 1,600 KM to south since they were fast and had sufficient power to do. Contrary, the lecturer casts doubt on this claims by stating about not adult animals which did not have phisical feature in order to migerate and they could not able to reach destination of the tratory. Therefore, adults would not leaved them since they could not survive for their own or migerating as them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'elaborate'.
Suggestion: elaborate
...tal darkness in the region. The authors elaborates his viewpoints by providing three main ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...of the Elk which lives in the western U.S and mentioned that they live in herds o...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...that they live in herds only because of the protect and do not migrate. Finally, the arti...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...he tratory. Therefore, adults would not leaved them since they could not survive for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in addition, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4161105663 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.014250143 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270637107021 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985745578774 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682122740544 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15215254967 0.162205337803 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262629869814 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.