tpo 2 integrated writing
the reading passage is about some facts that say we can consider as endotherms. Animals that can keep their body temperature above compared to the surrounding environment are endotherms. The woman in the lecture says that facts in the passage are not correct. she give us many reasons.
she says fossils that discovered in the polar regions are not good document for considerinf them as endotherms. in the past polar regions were warmer compared to peresent. also, maybe we this animals had migrated to this region.
the cecond fact about legs is not a good document, too. this kind of structurs can be ralete to the huge weight of the animal. this enourmos animal needs its legs beneathe her body for stand. So, this fact rejects, too.
the third reason about bone structure is not a good reason. By having haversian canals dianasurs must grow too much. but their rate of growth was slow. so this fact rejects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the reading passage is about some facts tha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...t facts in the passage are not correct. she give us many reasons. she says fossils...
^^^
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...cts in the passage are not correct. she give us many reasons. she says fossils that...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...not correct. she give us many reasons. she says fossils that discovered in the pol...
^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ent for considerinf them as endotherms. in the past polar regions were warmer comp...
^^
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...gions were warmer compared to peresent. also, maybe we this animals had migrated to ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...er compared to peresent. also, maybe we this animals had migrated to this region. t...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...s animals had migrated to this region. the cecond fact about legs is not a good do...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...about legs is not a good document, too. this kind of structurs can be ralete to the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...alete to the huge weight of the animal. this enourmos animal needs its legs beneathe...
^^^^
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...for stand. So, this fact rejects, too. the third reason about bone structure is no...
^^^
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...an canals dianasurs must grow too much. but their rate of growth was slow. so this ...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...uch. but their rate of growth was slow. so this fact rejects.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, third, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 1373.03311258 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 270.72406181 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79113924051 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.04702891845 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41222285444 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 145.348785872 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 419.366225166 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 21.2450331126 47% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6977301203 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.4666666667 110.228320801 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5333333333 21.698381199 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 7.06452816374 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.3589403974 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.498013245 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.2008830022 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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