TPO-20 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, it had been common practice since the late 1960s no to suppress natural forest fires. The “let it burn” policy assumed that forest fire would burn themselves out quickly, without causing much dama

In United states "let it burn" was a policy for treatment against forest fires. This policy means that the government let the forests to burn until the fire die out by itself. But in 1988 the huge forest burning caused to damage about 800,000 acres of the Yellowstone natural park. After that the government changed this law and paid attention to the natural forest fires. The three kind of damages can describe as below:

First, the natural vegetation of Yellowstone changed. About on third of the trees and other vegetation had been scorched.But it was a chance for other vegetation to become grow in the land as they freed from the shadows of the tall trees and got a chance to be exposed by sun light.

Second, the wild life in the Yellowstone suffered as a result of forest burning. The flames of the fire burned animal food and also lead to murder of small animals whose could not run away. But it took a chance to animals such as rabbits and hares to get a chance of life without predators.

Third, the local businesses suffered from the forest fire too.They loose the chance of tourist season.

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Average: 6.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... and other vegetation had been scorched.But it was a chance for other vegetation to...
^^^
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...esses suffered from the forest fire too.They loose the chance of tourist season. ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, kind of, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 1373.03311258 68% => OK
No of words: 197.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71065989848 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3885824424 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573604060914 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 419.366225166 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.134274629 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377741802585 0.272083759551 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14074465142 0.0996497079465 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792368092879 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200050858877 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077486471611 0.0443174109184 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 63.6247240618 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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