The speaker has argued about the forest fire and its caused which is mentioned by the writer in his passage.But speakers draw backs some point which is inaccurate when compared to what happened in real.
First,writer states that Yellowstone fire has cause damaged on the park's tress and vegetation.It has blackened and trees were charred from smoke.And also devasted wasteland.But its is not true due to forest fire Yellowstone has colonized bye new plants.Fire create opportunities to grow certain plant that could not grow.This is directly contradicted what the passage indicates.
Second,forest fire has affected the wildlife like deer,elk and not only this it has destructed the foodchain and species as per the passage.But as per the speaker small plant that replaces tress after fire created habitant for small animals like rabbit.Predators also depend on the food.This is another point where experience contradicted theory.
Third,writer has mentioned about the effect on tourism and it has causes negative consequences on economy and local business also being affected but speakers has contradicted the point as there is no any effect on tourism at all because Yellowstone had not seen such fire since 1988.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... mentioned by the writer in his passage.But speakers draw backs some point which is...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , writer
...pared to what happened in real. First,writer states that Yellowstone fire has cause ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parks'' or 'park's'?
Suggestion: parks'; park's
...llowstone fire has cause damaged on the parks tress and vegetation.It has blackened a...
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...maged on the parks tress and vegetation.It has blackened and trees were charred fr...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...kened and trees were charred from smoke.And also devasted wasteland.But its is not ...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... from smoke.And also devasted wasteland.But its is not true due to forest fire Yell...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Fire
...ellowstone has colonized bye new plants.Fire create opportunities to grow certain pl...
^^^^
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... grow certain plant that could not grow.This is directly contradicted what the passa...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , forest
...ed what the passage indicates. Second,forest fire has affected the wildlife like dee...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , elk
...fire has affected the wildlife like deer,elk and not only this it has destructed the...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...oodchain and species as per the passage.But as per the speaker small plant that rep...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Predators
... habitant for small animals like rabbit.Predators also depend on the food.This is another...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...abbit.Predators also depend on the food.This is another point where experience contr...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , writer
...experience contradicted theory. Third,writer has mentioned about the effect on touri...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... has contradicted the point as there is no any effect on tourism at all because Ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 191.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41361256545 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99344605405 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 21.2450331126 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2174642485 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 258.5 110.228320801 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.75 21.698381199 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06452816374 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28048746487 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158729002713 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436409769298 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158729002713 0.162205337803 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436409769298 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.3589403974 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.8541721854 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.0289183223 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.2367328918 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.498013245 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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