tpo 21
the passage give information about how genetic modification of trees can be help farmers and human beings while the lecturer challange mostly all good points that was mentioned before in the reading text.
to be specefic ,while one of the majar benifit of genetic modification in the writter view was that trees ,which are bieng genetically improved, are designed to survive hardier than nature trees; the lecturer belive that it is not a correct statment because they are just being created for some pertecuilar condition and they can't surpass all the unpredicted sitiations.in addition nature trees have so many species of one kind which they can surive diffrent kind of climate change.
the other point to allude to is, despite of author opinion which is being confident about that by bieng genetically modifed, trees can grow faster and have much more sustenance and eccelarating the growth of trees, the proffessor assert that they also endanger nature trees becuase they are plant between them and they use their soil food and light they need to grow; so they are all wiped out.
the cost of being plant agian is one of the episode that is discused about which for nature trees you plant them free but for genteically modified one you should pay to the company you have bought the seed from for the first time so it is not even ecnomically suited.
to sum up the proffesor was really disagree about the concept of improving the gene of trees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the passage give information about how gene...
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...ore in the reading text. to be specefic ,while one of the majar benifit of geneti...
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...ation in the writter view was that trees ,which are bieng genetically improved, ar...
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...for some pertecuilar condition and they cant surpass all the unpredicted sitiations....
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...urive diffrent kind of climate change. the other point to allude to is, despite of...
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...ed to grow; so they are all wiped out. the cost of being plant agian is one of the...
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... so it is not even ecnomically suited. to sum up the proffesor was really disagre...
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...ed. to sum up the proffesor was really disagree about the concept of improving the gene...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, while, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 249.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83534136546 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40260687547 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582329317269 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 21.2450331126 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.40014556 49.2860985944 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.8 110.228320801 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.8 21.698381199 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.4 7.06452816374 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385925949066 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187651996727 0.0996497079465 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896587293871 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187651996727 0.162205337803 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896587293871 0.0443174109184 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.3589403974 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.8541721854 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.0289183223 192% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.7273730684 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.498013245 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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