In the given set of materials, the main topic is the consequence of tree's genetic modification known as a change in genes' organism. While the author has focused on the advantages of this trend, the speaker in the follow-up material cast doubt on those points in a number of ways.
The first point mentioned in the article is that the genetic modified tree population has become more strenuous to different unexpected virus and damages based on empirical observation of papayas in Hawaii. However, according to the orator, since genetic modification in trees ruined their diversity, these category of trees were more vulnerable to a contagious infection.
Moreover, according to the essay, genetic modified trees brought about an unprecedented opportunity for farmers to have a higher yield without wasting any pesticide. Therefore, it was profitable strategy for them. Nonetheless, this was questioned by the lecturer as she stated that every farmers had to pay for genetically modified seeds annually, compared to traditional way, it was not beneficial.
Last but not least, the writer has asserted that the problem of overexploitation from wood resource especially those rare species might be tackled by burgeoning genetically modified tree. Conversely, the speaker discussed that due to aggressively nature of these categories of tree, other creatures' competitions for natural resource posed them on the threat of extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this category' or 'these categories'?
Suggestion: this category; these categories
...cation in trees ruined their diversity, these category of trees were more vulnerable to a cont...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.151639344262 0.158904122519 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102459016393 0.0723426182421 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573770491803 0.0435111971325 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0245901639344 0.0277247811725 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155737704918 0.128828473217 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0696721311475 0.0370669169778 188% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.06250949299 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327868852459 0.0208969081088 157% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.122950819672 0.128158765124 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00409836065574 0.0158828679856 26% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1436.0 1645.83664459 87% => OK
No of words: 221.0 271.125827815 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.49773755656 6.08160592843 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04852973271 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411764705882 0.374372842146 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.348416289593 0.287516216867 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253393665158 0.187439937562 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.194570135747 0.113142543107 172% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06250949299 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.539623497131 120% => OK
Word variations: 69.6041253474 53.8517498576 129% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5555555556 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6293376354 49.3711431718 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.555555556 132.220823453 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.878197800319 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 59.3971845148 50.5018328374 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.01754385965 1.90840788429 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.551937626072 0.549887131256 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174613682468 0.142949733639 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0635169068792 0.0787303798458 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.694160761601 0.631733273073 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132668291819 0.139662658121 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244893452499 0.266732575781 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850510081407 0.103435571967 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256787094356 0.414875509568 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112361674546 0.0530846634433 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347485939524 0.40443939384 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621402905322 0.0528353158467 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.26048565121 23% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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