TPO 22

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TPO 22

The reading calims that the ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoilne due to several reasons. However, the lecturer argues all the ideas and uses three evidences to refute them all.
The author argues that using ethanol is not helpful for solving one of the most important environmental issues which is green house effect caused by increase in the generation of carbon dioxide from burning fuels. Convesrely, The lecturer brings up the idea that burning ethanol is not adding to the global warming because plants absorb carbon dioxide for their growth. He states that although, burning ethanol release carbon dioxide, growing plants counteract this issue by absorbing carbon dioxide from the air because growing plants remove CO2.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that for producing a large amount of ehtanol, the amount of plants available for uses will decrease drastically. On the contrary, the professor underlines the fact that to produce fuels such as ethanol, cellulose of the plants can be used and by using cell walls of the plants, a lot of plants would not be removed.
Finally, The reading asserts that the reason that the price of ethanol can compete with the price of gasoline, is that government helps to lower the price of ethanol in the form of tax. So, if the government wants to cease helping producers, the price of ethanol will enhance dramaticallyl. In contrast, the speaker dismisses it due to the fact that in the future, the price of ethanol can compete the price of gasoline. This is because if in the future, the amount of ethanol usuage increase, more ethanol should be produced and increase in the production of ethanol can decrease the production price. He states that, one study revealed that by enhancing the ethanol production, the price of ethanol will drop by 40 percent.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the price of ethanol can compete with the price of gasoline, is that governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, so, in contrast, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99019607843 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53253636533 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6013820235 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513268384765 0.272083759551 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196184387703 0.0996497079465 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640702194166 0.0662205650399 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279696638437 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693881113866 0.0443174109184 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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