tpo 24
The reading and the lecture both address about a 70-million-year-old fossil of Tyrannosaurus rex. The author discusses the evidence of remains of blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix in the T.rex's leg bone. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article.
First of all, the author points out that there was a soft organic substance inside the channels and this substance may represent the relics of actual blood vessels of T.rex. The lecture challenges this point by mentioning that it is true that there was a soft substance; however, this substance left by bacterial colonies.
Secondly, the author states that the spheres contain iron and dark red centers with the size of red blood cell. The lecture rebuts this argument by explaining that the origin of the spheres were not red blood cells, but there were pieces of the reddish materials. Furthermore, the lecture says that the iron filled spheres found in animals with no red blood cells.
Lastly, the author states that the scientists found collagen, is a fibrous protein, in the dinosaur leg bone. The author says that collagen is the main component of living bone tissues. The lecture, on the other hand, posits that collagen did not come from the T.rex, but the collagen may remain from the human skin who handling the bone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...collagen matrix in the T.rexs leg bone. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93243243243 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49881475028 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7499311294 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06452816374 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478784688152 0.272083759551 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177146469113 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941180751098 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260074175689 0.162205337803 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052462462509 0.0443174109184 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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