Animal fossils cannot provide information about actual tissue of bodies easily. Scientist found fossils of 70 million years ago that may belong to dinosour that contain actual tissue of animal. The reading passage mentions some evidance that support the idea that fossils belong to dinosour. But the lecturer thinks that these evidances don't necessairly prove the idea.
The reading passage thinks that existance of soft, flexible orgnaic substance inside the bone's channel proves the idea that fossils belong to T. rex. But the lecturer thinks that existance of flexible substance isnot necessairly because of blood vessels. Maybe, these flexible substance is the residue of bacteria colonies.
The reading passage thinks that presence of sphers in the various parts of bone is the evidance for existance of red blood vessels in bone. But the lecturer thinks that sphers found in the fossils of other animals in the same place which didn't have red blood vessels. Sphers may have different origion.
Finally, the reading passage thinks that existence of collagen, which is protein tissue, is another reason that proves the fossils belong to dinosour. But the lecturer thinks that collagen can't exist more than one hundred years and this contadicts with the time that T. rex lived.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he lecturer thinks that these evidances dont necessairly prove the idea. The read...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ances dont necessairly prove the idea. The reading passage thinks that existanc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is the residue of bacteria colonies. The reading passage thinks that presence...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...f other animals in the same place which didnt have red blood vessels. Sphers may have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls. Sphers may have different origion. Finally, the reading passage thinks that...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... But the lecturer thinks that collagen cant exist more than one hundred years and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26341463415 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27259492341 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 145.348785872 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49756097561 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6967425241 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 7.06452816374 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257475058876 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964876169654 0.0996497079465 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632722354676 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163948535384 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044097447808 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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