tpo 24 task 1
The article states that one dinosaur fossil which recently discovered fortunately has remained complete somehow different parts such aS bone hallow and its inside materials and soft tissue collagen can be detested. The article provide three reason for that. however, the professor has not thought this and he believe that this fossil does not have these materials and other sources should be considered for this material. he opposes each reason stated by the writer.
First, the article avers that the dinosaur’s fossil reveals many small branched channels which is related to hollow bone structure of animal and the materials in these channels are related to red blood cells. In contrast the lecturer opposes this idea by saying that soft tissue which is flexible and sensible cannot remained intact in this long time. he states that they are bacterial organic materials which is remained behind of bacterial colonies activity in this period of time.
Second, the article claims that microscopic examination showed several sphere structure in the animal bone fossil which is connected to red blood cells of T,rex. however, the professor avers that dinosaurs do not have red blood cells, and these red materials probably can be redish materials.
Third, the article brings another evidence to show the importance of this discovery by telling about scientific test which showed this fossil has collagen in its leg bone. On the other hand, the professor refutes this claim by explaining that nobody has found soft protein material such as collagen in much newer fossils. he states that it is so improbable which collagen remained intact for this long period of time and this collagen comes from another resources like researcher skin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...e collagen can be detested. The article provide three reason for that. however, the pro...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... article provide three reason for that. however, the professor has not thought this and...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...e professor has not thought this and he believe that this fossil does not have these ma...
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Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...should be considered for this material. he opposes each reason stated by the write...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... each reason stated by the writer. First, the article avers that the d...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...nels are related to red blood cells. In contrast the lecturer opposes this idea by sayin...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 363, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...nnot remained intact in this long time. he states that they are bacterial organic ...
^^
Line 9, column 453, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'colonies'' or 'coloni's', 'colony's'?
Suggestion: colonies'; coloni's; colony's
...s which is remained behind of bacterial colonies activity in this period of time. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 479, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... of bacterial colonies activity in this period of time. Second, the article claims t...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s activity in this period of time. Second, the article claims that microsco...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rex
...ich is connected to red blood cells of T,rex. however, the professor avers that dino...
^^^^
Line 13, column 168, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... connected to red blood cells of T,rex. however, the professor avers that dinosaurs do ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... probably can be redish materials. Third, the article brings another ev...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 327, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...such as collagen in much newer fossils. he states that it is so improbable which c...
^^
Line 21, column 407, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... collagen remained intact for this long period of time and this collagen comes from another re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32616487455 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43161898841 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7984207181 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365761046422 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136955013883 0.0996497079465 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999557474203 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243797908785 0.162205337803 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660445294966 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.