TPO 28 - Integrated Writing Task
The reading passage and the lecture both discuss about the history of the man who was the first one to conquer the North Pole. However, the lecturer doubts about the truth of the story.
Firstly, although the committee declared that Peary reached the North Pole by investigating Peary's equipment. The woman disagrees with the statement. She argues that the committee was constructed by Peary's close friends. Moreover, they offered the fund of money for Peary. In addition, the committee took only two days to investigate. Therefore, the examination may be bias.
Second, the writer offers the evidence that Avery made the same task in less than 30 days to support that Peary could make it, too. The lecturer refutes that it is not fair to compare between Avery and Peary. She feels this way because the food for Avery is supplied by an airplane rather than a dogsled. And the weather was more favorable for Avery, while it was not the same condition as Peary.
Last but not the least, for the lecturer, measuring the shadows in Peary's picture is not conveiencing. The lecturer refutes that the photo taken by a original camera is too old to be identified. The photograph is fussy and fading overtime. As a result, using the picture with low quality to calculate the place where Peary reached is not wise and inaccurate.
For these three reasons, the lecturer does not believe that Peary was the first one to reach the North Pole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80566801619 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45056685479 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562753036437 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7595903532 49.2860985944 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8235294118 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361384795021 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100298659777 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11035030194 0.0662205650399 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197216216135 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720509946919 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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