TPO-29 - Integrated Writing Task Large numbers of dinosaur fossils have been discovered in deposits on Alaska's North Slope, a region that today experiences an extremely cold,arctic climate. One hundred million years ago, when those dinosaurs were alive,

In the given set of materials, the main topic is centered on whether the population of particular dinosaurs lived in the North of Alaska Slope, called edmontosaur, migrated during harsh winter or not. While the author has focused on those points to acknowledge this hypothesis, the speaker in the follow-up material cast doubts on this event in a number of ways.

The first point in the article is that the high reliance of edmontosaur's food habits on plants has made these species migrate to warmer area. However, the lecturer asserted that the abundance food resource in North land due to a great growing condition of their summer provided the nutrition for their survival.

Moreover, according to the essay, due to their fossils, edmontosaurs lived in the herds which allowed them have seasonal migration. Nonetheless, this was questioned by the orator as she stated that living in herds was not a logical justification for migration hypothesis as many species like specific elks which colonized in group, but not migrated.

Last but not least, the writer has stated that edmontosaurs had physical ability to run fast that paved the way for their travel to a warmer habitat. Conversely, according to the lecture, all their offspring could not move quickly and hindered them to migrate long distances.

Votes
Average: 8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268085106383 0.261695866417 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.153191489362 0.158904122519 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0723404255319 0.0723426182421 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0468085106383 0.0435111971325 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0340425531915 0.0277247811725 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144680851064 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0425531914894 0.0370669169778 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71861833785 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382978723404 0.0208969081088 183% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123404255319 0.128158765124 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00425531914894 0.0158828679856 27% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00851063829787 0.0114777025283 74% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1311.0 1645.83664459 80% => OK
No of words: 214.0 271.125827815 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1261682243 6.08160592843 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04852973271 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378504672897 0.374372842146 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271028037383 0.287516216867 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210280373832 0.187439937562 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135514018692 0.113142543107 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71861833785 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.539623497131 116% => OK
Word variations: 64.1526846771 53.8517498576 119% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 26.75 21.7502111507 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2383758658 49.3711431718 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.875 132.220823453 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 21.7502111507 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.878197800319 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.39072847682 0% => OK
Readability: 53.8528037383 50.5018328374 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.94545454545 1.90840788429 102% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.636780728109 0.549887131256 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.169670560005 0.142949733639 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0284671187829 0.0787303798458 36% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.742619242887 0.631733273073 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687838839589 0.139662658121 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.338462563283 0.266732575781 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794683360842 0.103435571967 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328612677925 0.414875509568 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0735633587124 0.0530846634433 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.426498401978 0.40443939384 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615166830654 0.0528353158467 116% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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