tpo 31.1
The text and lecturer offer two opposing views on the accuracy of the hypothesis which illustrates the reasons of fine lines patterns around the Sinosauropteryx fossil are the clues of the feather. While the reading part lists some clues to castes doubts on the truth of this surmise, the professor counters these specific points and presents some hints to call into question for the information in the text.
First of all, the lecturer refutes that this lines are fibers cause of the skin decomposition. While in the reading part this incident is named as one of the hints. The professor states that based upon the other samples of the fossils on that region, all the fossils are preserved in the best condition and without any decomposition. Hence, these dinosaurs’ fossils maintain pure and there were no any decomposition.
Next, although the reading part uses some surmise that line surrounding the skeleton are remains of the frills rather than the feather, the lecturer casts doubts on the truth of this claim. As the man states there is a main chemical difference among element of feather and frill. Feather contains a kind of the protein which the frill does not. Moreover, based upon the examination of this line, they discover the big portion of that chemical on that lines.
Finally, the lecturer argues that there are no any meaningful functions for these feathers. Meanwhile, the passage presumes that these feathers did not depict the major function such as the regulating the body temperature and flying; consequently, they were useless. Based upon the professor's evidences there are other kind of usage for feather besides the flying and regulating. For instance, it has the display function. Since the dinosaur’s feathers colored in the orange and withe, thus it had the usage to attract the mate.
The text and lecturer offer two opposing views on the accuracy of the hypothesis which illustrates the reasons of fine lines patterns around the Sinosauropteryx fossil are the clues of the feather.
Description: what is the subject for 'are'? '
to castes doubts on the truth
to caste doubts on the truth
the lecturer refutes that
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these dinosaurs’ fossils maintain pure and there were no any decomposition.
these dinosaurs’ fossils maintain purely and there were no any decomposition.
line surrounding the skeleton are remains of the frills
the lines surrounding the skeleton are remains of the frills
such as the regulating the body temperature and flying;
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Since the dinosaur’s feathers colored in the orange and withe, thus it had the usage to attract the mate.
Description: 'it' refers to what? Be sensitive to use pronouns.
Sentence: First of all, the lecturer refutes that this lines are fibers cause of the skin decomposition.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and lines
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Words: 301 250 //You may leave some minutes checking out grammar issues.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 301 250
No. of Characters: 1483 1200
No. of Different Words: 152 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.165 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.927 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.521 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.37 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.542 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4