TPO 40
Addressing the issue of landing human being on the surface of Venus, the reading brings up three different obstacles on the way of this plan. The professor, on the other hand, claims that by constructing a floating station in Venus's atmosphere rather than its surface, 50 kilometers above its surface, all of these problems would easily solve.
The first problem the reading discusses is the higher pressure of Venus's surface compared to earth's pressure which is approximately 90 times bigger than the earth's pressure. This, in turn, would crash every single object landed on the Venus. Due to the physical law of pressure which says by increasing the elevation, the pressure will decrease, the professor states that in the floating station, the pressure is exactly equal to the pressure we experience on the earth which is suitable and tolerable for all objects including human being.
Since there are not any sources of water on Venus's surface, nor are there any molecules of water vapor and oxygen in its atmosphere, Venus's atmospheric components including carbon dioxide, sulfuric acid, and nitrogen, the reading insists on the impossibility of landing on Venus while human being needs oxygen to survive. Referring to chemical reactions making it possible to produce oxygen from sulfuric acid and carbon dioxide, the professor refutes this impediment as well.
Finally, the passage explains that the high percentage of sunlight, around 60 percent, are reflected by the thick clouds of Venus, and even the reached sunlight to the surface is again reflected by the second carbon dioxide layer. Although the professor admits this point, he points out it would not the problem of a floating station since its residents would receive more than 40 percent of sunlight because of their location above a part of these thick clouds. In addition to collecting direct sunlight, spacemen can accumulate reflected rays from clouds and in turn produce electricity for their technical staffs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'earth'.
Suggestion: earth
... pressure of Venuss surface compared to earths pressure which is approximately 90 time...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270655270655 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.136752136752 0.158904122519 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0740740740741 0.0723426182421 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.0435111971325 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.02849002849 0.0277247811725 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148148148148 0.128828473217 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0569800569801 0.0370669169778 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60560974632 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.022792022792 0.0208969081088 109% => OK
Particles: 0.002849002849 0.00154638098197 184% => OK
Determiners: 0.125356125356 0.128158765124 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.017094017094 0.0158828679856 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00854700854701 0.0114777025283 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1985.0 1645.83664459 121% => OK
No of words: 319.0 271.125827815 118% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22257053292 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.04852973271 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429467084639 0.374372842146 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313479623824 0.287516216867 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.228840125392 0.187439937562 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12539184953 0.113142543107 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60560974632 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.539623497131 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.1933423915 53.8517498576 108% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 31.9 21.7502111507 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2135721316 49.3711431718 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.5 132.220823453 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9 21.7502111507 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.878197800319 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 63.2479623824 50.5018328374 125% => OK
Elegance: 2.35211267606 1.90840788429 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.702551545183 0.549887131256 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135999504622 0.142949733639 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0528735876391 0.0787303798458 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.674655388216 0.631733273073 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185598191588 0.139662658121 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.346934177469 0.266732575781 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1283016402 0.103435571967 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332155171066 0.414875509568 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0852786671479 0.0530846634433 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.508733514665 0.40443939384 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280270577389 0.0528353158467 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.