Both the reading and the lisiening are discussing about the possibility of permanent human persence on the venus. While the text provides some reasons to support the idea that the maintaining the human persence on the Venus is impossible, the professor casts doubt on them and believes it is certainly possible.
First of all, the writer makes the point that the pressure at the venus' surface is greater than earth' surface that it crush enything that people might land on venus' surface. The professor, however, demonstrates another idea that people can bulid a station at about 50 km higher than venus surface. In that latitude the pressure is equal to earth surface pressure. Therefore, people's devices would not be crushed.
In addition, despite the problem mentioned in the reading passage that water and oxigen should be imported from earth to venus, the lucture argues that there are componds such as sulfuric and carbon on the venus, so people can produce water and oxigen through chemical reaction by using the composion which are already exist on the venus. Hence, there in no need for importing water and oxigen from earth.
Lastly, the auther states that there are thich clouds of carbon on the venus' atmosphere that cause reflect 60 percent of sunlight reflect to the space. The speaker calls this idea into a question by saying that these clouds are not thich enough to reflect 60percent of sunlight and the sunlight iradiation can move through them. Moreover, these clouds are lower than human station, so the people who live in the station can benefit from both the direct and reflected sunlight.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who cannot accept criticism from others cannot be successful at working in a group Use reasons and examples to explain your choice. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who cannot accept criticism from others cannot be successful at working in a group. Use reasons and examples to explain your choice. 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99259259259 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34557634603 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.045226602 49.2860985944 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 21.698381199 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416027643386 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145595204878 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590837080133 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220655001133 0.162205337803 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501246089631 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.