TPO 41 integrated writing

The reading passage talks about the new regulations that are not important, while the lecturer holds a different point of view.
In the reading passage, the author begins by stating that this regulation already present and thus it is unnecessary things. It is mentioned in the text that , the crucial matter is that we have to follow liner special matter that impedes to contaminate. The professor, refutes this statement by contending that the rules are insufficient and it is only applicable for new land.He suggests that there is scope for old land and hence, it causes damage for the old land due to dumping chemicals into it.
Secondly, the writer points out that a large number of recyle process would be hindered . The article notes that, recycle materials are used for concrete and bricks. As a result, customers get panic and do not buy it. However, the lecturer, rejects this challenge by arguing that people use mercury for a long time . He believes that they used and maintained it succefully and they did no feel any afraid.
Finally, the text states that the new policies would be incresed coste price. This is supported by evidence that then the company may increase the price of electricity. The speaker, nonetheless, casts on doubt on the claim made in the passeage and says that the company have to invest some money. He claims that it will increase only one percentage and thus no require to be worried.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 245 250
No. of Characters: 1146 1200
No. of Different Words: 146 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.956 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.678 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.434 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.846 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.179 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.298 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 4