Based on the given materials, the article as well as the lecture discusses glass windows, which count as elements of modern architecture. Because of the characteristic of these windows, birds have harmed themselves by flying through them. The author states that there are some logical solutions to give the birds ability for distinguishing between open air and the glass windows. That being said, the lecturer provides several ideas to repudiate it.
Initially, the author says that businesses can use one-way glass as the materials of buildings. While people who live in the building can see outside without any problem, the birds can distinguish between glass windows and open areas. However, the lecturer explains that this method cannot be effective, owing to the fact that the one-way glass windows reflect objects of the open area as a mirror, and birds does not have ability to distinguish between mirror and other things. So, if the birds see reflected objects, like trees and sky, they would fly through it.
Second, the writer proclaims that another solution is painting colorful lines on regular windows and whenever the birds see these paintings, like thin stripes, they avoid to fly through them and people can see outside from some unpainted areas. Yet again, the lecturer underscores that the mentioned unpainted areas are seemed as holes for birds and they like to fly through it. It can be solved by using very small unpainted areas but it will make the interior of the house darker.
The last point of contention between the speaker and the passage is using artificial magnetic fields. The author thinks that, as well as human that use magnetic compass to find out the right directions, the birds also use magnetic fields as their natural ability. So, with constructing an artificial magnetic field, people can navigate birds to any directions, except the windows. On the other hand, the lecturer explains that birds use magnetic fields for long distance trips like moving from cold places to warmer ones before winter, but in short trips they use eye and brightness to know the directions. So, this method cannot work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid flying'.
Suggestion: avoid flying
...hese paintings, like thin stripes, they avoid to fly through them and people can see outside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, as to, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1373.03311258 130% => OK
No of words: 353.0 270.72406181 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07082152975 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45998071293 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526912181303 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0708988737 49.2860985944 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528272270339 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162516152547 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772477248457 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30472999026 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794427669855 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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