Tpo 42
Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass windows There are, however, several solutions that responsible businesses can use to prevent injuries to birds.
The reading and lecture are both about glass create trouble when birds fly. The author of the reading feels that birds often cannot distinguish between the glass and open-air. The lecturer challenged the claim made by the author. He is on the opinion that none of the solutions is effective to solve the problem.
First of all, the author argues that one-way glass can possibly solve the problem because birds see the glass in their way and will change the direction. He also states that though the glass is work as one-way people cloud see through a window. The specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that one-way glass may work as a mirror. When light reflects on the mirror the glass reflects back the sky image. As a result, birds think the glass as a sky and fly through.
Second, the writer suggests that painting the glass with the colour can solve the problem. He also mentions that the design like thin strips birds can watch and avoid the path. The lecturer rebuts this by mentioning that the design as per reading birds see it as a hole when flies. Moreover, rooms inside the building have provided no light.
Third, the author posits that birds can interpret the sense of artificial magnetic field by which they determine the direction. He also claims if the building is made with the powerful electromagnet it spread the signals and birds can understand the barrier. In contrast, the lecturer position is that birds use the magnetic field to travel a long distance when they migrate cold area to a warm area. He also noted that this mechanism is not worked for a short distance in the city because for a short distance they use to see the vision and bright colour to travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...inguish between the glass and open-air. The lecturer challenged the claim made by t...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...l, the author argues that one-way glass can possibly solve the problem because birds see the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat one-way glass may work as a mirror. When light reflects on the mirror the glass ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... city because for a short distance they use to see the vision and bright colour to ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68543046358 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27212404927 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483443708609 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0425226698 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6111111111 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484759196229 0.272083759551 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148897726371 0.0996497079465 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887395342224 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280247743624 0.162205337803 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567716593883 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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