TPO-45 Integrated Writing Task
In this set materials, the reading passage state that the bees could not make some structures which were found in Arizona. On the other hand, the listening section brings into question the reading points by providing different reasons(and examples).
First of all, the reading passage indicates that researchers have not been found some fossils that belong to the bees which lived in 200 million years ago. In contrast, the lecturer opposes this view by mentioning that the trees live in 200 million years ago could not produce sticky liquid and that bees could not be preserved as fossils at that time. This sticky liquid was called resin which protects the bees nest. The resin could protect from the bees nests. Therefore, the fossils could not remain from 200 million years ago.
second, the reading argues that 200 million years ago, a flowering plant could not exist; therefore, the bees could not live; conversely, what the lecturer believes is different. She points that early bee feeding non-flowering plants such as the fern. when flowering plants were produced, they started to adapted with flowering plants. Hence, this claim is not correct.
Finally, according to the reading, the bee's nest fossils are as the same as the modern bees nest that made with a chamber; thus, they could not belong to the bees that live 200 million years ago. However, the speakers claim that modern bees use some specific chemical to waterproof their nests. and chemical similar to it has been found in the discovered fossil structure. Therefore, this evidence supports the theory of bee existence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...remain from 200 million years ago. second, the reading argues that 200 million ye...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... non-flowering plants such as the fern. when flowering plants were produced, they st...
^^^^
Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...fic chemical to waterproof their nests. and chemical similar to it has been found i...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09885931559 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32833158333 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505703422053 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3213999133 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948372254408 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401152936074 0.0996497079465 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174270354013 0.0662205650399 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652791897232 0.162205337803 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138885430967 0.0443174109184 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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