The passage proposes three advantages of electronic medical record systems over tradition paper-based record keeping, all of which were questioned by the lecture.
First off, the professor in the lecture does not believe that the use of electronic records can reduce costs and save space for storage, because doctors still regard paper records as emergency back up with electronic records widely used. Meanwhile, paper records and signature are also important in legal process.
Second, that electronic medical records can reduce the chances of errors is dismissed by the professor as well. In her view, doctors always take notes or write prescriptions on paper and then transfer it into electronic system, Which means that as long as doctors have poor writing skill, chances are good that they would make mistakes.
Last, the professor argued that research is till hard to take although electronic medical records is easy to draw out information and access, for there being too many barriers such as privacy law and strict procedure. Also, it is too difficult to get patients' grant in that they are likely to block the use of their data.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, still, then, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 186.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17204301075 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49499441071 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1104720643 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.428571429 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55196527856 0.272083759551 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244303670761 0.0996497079465 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124374646692 0.0662205650399 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324113718806 0.162205337803 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661118041531 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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