TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task

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TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task

The passage and the lecture discuss why the population of many frog species around the world have declined or even was going to extinction. The author of the passage presents three theories to ascertain changes occurred in some area that cause this population's reduction. The lecturer believes none of the reasons could correctly explain the problem and give some solution that is practical and solve the problem of declining frog populations.
The author argues that frogs are being affected by pesticides that farmers are using them to keep their crops away from insects. The lecturer argues against this reason and believes that the solution must be economical fair and practical. besides that is not possible for farmers neither don't use pesticides nor change their farms' location. As a result, laws couldn't prohibit farmers from using pesticides for frogs population problem.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that fungus causes frogs to die of dehydration. Therefore, the reading is suggesting usage of antifungal medication as a solution. Nevertheless, the lecturer illustrates that if they want to protect frogs with medicine, they should do it individually for each frog, and do it again and again, for each generation. Consequently, this approach is expensive and that is not practical.
Finally, the reading asserts that frogs’ natural habitats are in danger by human activities. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that you couldn't prevent people from using water for development. besides, the real water problem is global warming that human couldn't stop it yet.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...s occurred in some area that cause this populations reduction. The lecturer believes none o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... that cause this populations reduction. The lecturer believes none of the reasons c...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...problem of declining frog populations. The author argues that frogs are being affe...
^^^
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to keep their crops away from insects. The lecturer argues against this reason and...
^^^
Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... must be economical fair and practical. besides that is not possible for farmers neithe...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: besides,
... must be economical fair and practical. besides that is not possible for farmers neithe...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hat is not possible for farmers neither dont use pesticides nor change their farms l...
^^^^
Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...their farms location. As a result, laws couldnt prohibit farmers from using pesticides ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...poses this point by explaining that you couldnt prevent people from using water for dev...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...eople from using water for development. besides, the real water problem is global warmi...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...er problem is global warming that human couldnt stop it yet.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39682539683 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74863396292 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2417526237 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426958734841 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136182811324 0.0996497079465 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100302625738 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239048627721 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343645976537 0.0443174109184 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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