The reading exposes some facts about establishing collonies in asteroids. However the professor cast doubts and saying that this may not be praticle due to several reasons.
The first one it's because asteroids with the low gravity are unsafe. They offer some risks to human health such as body mass loses and diminishing of bone desity. To crontradictis the reading states that wold be safer landing in places wiht less gravity. In addition it wold cost less fuel to get in and get out the asteroid.
Second, the professor explain that the cost involved in mining a asteroid are to high. Furthermore, if we find a large sorce of metals, after mining it, the reserves of metal will grow and the prices goes down. This fact may elavates even more the mining cost in asteroids. On the contrary, according to the reading an asteroid colony would be very profitable.
Third, the professos says that althougit maybe easy to reach an asteroid near the earth. The asteroid's orbital path leads it to places far away from mars or the moon. However the readin says that is easy to reach a asteroid from our planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ut establishing collonies in asteroids. However the professor cast doubts and saying th...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ue to several reasons. The first one its because asteroids with the low gravity ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...landing in places wiht less gravity. In addition it wold cost less fuel to get in and ge...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...xplain that the cost involved in mining a asteroid are to high. Furthermore, if w...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: TO_TOO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... cost involved in mining a asteroid are to high. Furthermore, if we find a large s...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... places far away from mars or the moon. However the readin says that is easy to reach a...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r the readin says that is easy to reach a asteroid from our planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, third, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 193.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77720207254 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41558605201 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 419.366225166 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.4341510214 49.2860985944 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9230769231 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0491703148282 0.272083759551 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180168074474 0.0996497079465 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0145277185673 0.0662205650399 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0290654909735 0.162205337803 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00847724967813 0.0443174109184 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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