TPO 49
The reading claims that humpback whales help from stars to navigate for searching food and mating and provides three reasons to support its approach. However, the lecturer finds all ideas which have been mentioned by the reading dubious and presents some evidences to refute them all.
At first place, the author argues that this kind of animal has a cognitive ability with high degree that can use stars for their navigation. In contrast, the lecturer brings up the idea that they are not intelligent if use stars for finding way. Other animals such as birds and dogs use stars for this purpose, but their cognitive ability is average. They can able to use stars and do not relate to cognitive. They have this ability when they born. So there is not any connection between cognitive ability and navigation by stars.
Furthermore, the reading passage asserts that humpback whales travel a long distance in straight lines. Others animals can do this job by some external objects or forces, but they can not use external mark in the open ocean. So they should rely on stars as external signs that lead them to approach their destination. Conversely, the professor underlines the fact that they must use external objects or forces for finding their way in straight lines. They have a bio magnetite that can scene the earth's magnetic field. So they are sensitive to the earth field and can understand it. They orient their ways by this magnetic field.
Finally, the reading holds the view that they float straight up for a period of the time and look like that they are watching the stars. This behavior is known as spy-hopping and it is scarce between other marine animals. Therefore, they can see the stars and help them to find their way. On the contrast, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that they do not look at stars while their heads above the sea level. Some other animals such as sharks have this behavior and they use it for hunting. Also humpback whales do this activity in day that there is not any stars in the sky. So according to above mentioned, the spy-hopping is only pure speculation about this topic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
.... Therefore, they can see the stars and help them to find their way. On the contrast, the speaker...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 507, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s behavior and they use it for hunting. Also humpback whales do this activity in day...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, in contrast, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 22.412803532 228% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 372.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74193548387 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31639334161 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481182795699 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8199999481 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1818181818 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456345707709 0.272083759551 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143032362993 0.0996497079465 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566672646648 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285342256215 0.162205337803 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621983397644 0.0443174109184 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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