The reading and the listening have a debate on navigation of humpback wales in long distance. The idea of reading and listening are contradictory to each other.
First, the reading passage states that humpback wales seem to be intelligent to use stars to navigate. On the other hand, the listening points out that there is not any conection beetwen inteligence and use stars. he provides an example of doch which is not a inteligent animals but can navigate instinctively by star.
Second, the reading passage states that humpback whales migrate in straight lines. However, the listening conveys that some animals have sens of bio magnetic in their body which force them to cheng their straight way. They oriented by biomagnetic fild rather than star.
Third, the author argus that humpback whales show unusual behavier by keepin their hed abow the water and navigation by stars. However, The speakers explain that they are using this physical behaviar for looking for predetors. She provide an example of shark which use their hed to look for other animals. Beside she states that they are using this type of behaviur during the day which is not any stars in the sky.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...tion beetwen inteligence and use stars. he provides an example of doch which is no...
^^
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rovides an example of doch which is not a inteligent animals but can navigate ins...
^
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he'd
...s show unusual behavier by keepin their hed abow the water and navigation by stars....
^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...behaviar for looking for predetors. She provide an example of shark which use their hed...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he'd
...ide an example of shark which use their hed to look for other animals. Beside she s...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 197.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95939086294 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45021547547 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558375634518 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8612967456 49.2860985944 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38057259867 0.272083759551 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131639276908 0.0996497079465 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617768888332 0.0662205650399 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208306472618 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876867437061 0.0443174109184 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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