The author and the passage both talks about the humpback whales. The author in the passage mention that humpback whales migrating for long distance for feeding and mating process may be navigating by the stars and provide the three supporting reason about these statement. However,the professor says that using stars for migrating and mating purposes is quiet fascinating but the provided evidence from the passage is not convincing and he totally refutes all the claim made by author and provide the three reason.
First, In the passage, the author explains that whales are intelligent enough to use the star to navigate. But, the professor rebuts the claim by saying that there is no real connection between animal ability to use star for navigation. According to him, other animal can do it like example, dog is only a average intelligent animal which is also use the star for navigate. The real fact is animal can able to use star which is came from their instinct by born. Whales may be intelligent but there is no significant connection between it.
Second, the author says that whales can migrate from one place to another in straight line which no one can do it. And he connect this by saying only because whale use star to do it. On the other hand, the professors totally disagree with the statement made by author and said most of the animal are able to use the straight line while migrating. They can do it by using the external force like earth magnetic field. Animal have a bio magnetic force and which is very sensitive to earth magnetic field. Animal like whale use earth magnetic field to migrate rather than star.
Third, humpback has a one specific behavior which is rare in other animal known as spy hopping and the function of spy hooping is that providing the information to navigate. And the professor refutes the author claim by saying that other animal like shark can floating straight up for minutes at a time but not for migrate or star but to hunt . Whale can float during the day time where no star can see in the sky so it is just a pure speculation nothing more than that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ovide the three supporting reason about these statement. However,the professor says that using ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ng reason about these statement. However,the professor says that using stars for mig...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mal can do it like example, dog is only a average intelligent animal which is al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample, dog is only a average intelligent animal which is also use the star for na...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...erage intelligent animal which is also use the star for navigate. The real fact is...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...is animal can able to use star which is came from their instinct by born. Whales may...
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... Second, the author says that whales can migrate from one place to another in str...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'connects'.
Suggestion: connects
...ght line which no one can do it. And he connect this by saying only because whale use s...
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Suggestion:
... and the function of spy hooping is that providing the information to navigate. A...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... but not for migrate or star but to hunt . Whale can float during the day time whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 371.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6846361186 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36640992681 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4474393531 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 419.366225166 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5429743097 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384366846565 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137345113115 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632515996882 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245994038667 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294637484552 0.0443174109184 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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