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There has been some debate among the quaker sound. The reading provides three theories about what might have cause that odd sound. However lecture disagrees. It claims that the three theories have some problems
The first point of dispute is if the sound is a call of male and female ocra whales during courtship ritual. The lecture contends that the ocra whales are living near the surface and the submarine are down in the ocean. If the sound are from Ocra whales, the sonar will able to detected.
Another controversial issue is if the sound is caused by giant squid. The lecture says tha the squid appeared in the ocean in the 1960 and then disappeared by 1980. the fact the the sound is from a squid make no sense.
The final point of dispute is if the sound are coming from another country submarine patroling the area. The lecture claims that any other submarine will not be able to move that fast and change direction quickly, Any submarine will have engine produce sound.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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... the three theories have some problems The first point of dispute is if the sou...
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...ales, the sonar will able to detected. Another controversial issue is if the so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 22.412803532 27% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 179.0 270.72406181 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64804469274 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15119346986 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 145.348785872 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 419.366225166 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9952771843 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 7.06452816374 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370515766181 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138981300285 0.0996497079465 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655761779277 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215502335139 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370505410133 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 63.6247240618 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.