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There has been some debate among what produce the quacker sound. The reading provides three theories about what might have cause that odd sound. However lecture disagrees. It claims that the three theories have some problems
The first point of dispute is if the sound is a call of male and female Orca whales during courtship ritual. The lecture contends that the Orca whales are living near the surface and the submarine are down in the ocean. If the sound are from Orca whales, the sonar will able to detected. On the other hand the reading says that Orca whales know to inhabit the area where the submarine were picking up the odd sound.
Another controversial issue is if the sound is caused by giant squid. The lecture says that the squid appeared in the ocean in the 1960 and then disappeared by 1980. the fact the sound is from a squid make no sense. However the reading oppose this point saying that the sound is emitted from the squids as they live deep in the ocean. They are difficult to detected by sonar by they have soft bodies with no skeletons
The final point of dispute is if the sound are coming from another country's submarine patrolling the area. The lecture claims that any other submarine will not be able to move that fast and change direction quickly, Any submarine will have engine produce sound. But, the reading refutes stating that the other submarine are not detected because they using a kind of technology make them undetectable by the sonar.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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There has been some debate among what produce the quacker sound. The read...
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...t what might have cause that odd sound. However lecture disagrees. It claims that the t...
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... the three theories have some problems The first point of dispute is if the sou...
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...bmarine were picking up the odd sound. Another controversial issue is if the so...
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... the 1960 and then disappeared by 1980. the fact the sound is from a squid make no...
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...d then disappeared by 1980. the fact the sound is from a squid make no sense. How...
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...e sound is from a squid make no sense. However the reading oppose this point saying th...
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... they have soft bodies with no skeletons The final point of dispute is if the sou...
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...ubmarine will have engine produce sound. But, the reading refutes stating that th...
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...rine are not detected because they using a kind of technology make them undetecta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69172932331 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18539755252 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492481203008 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5707979153 49.2860985944 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 110.228320801 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522922383067 0.272083759551 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177411225092 0.0996497079465 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100232129179 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299906590896 0.162205337803 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064888407723 0.0443174109184 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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