TPO1-TASK1
The reading passage states that a policy which compels companies to offer their employees the choice of working a four-day workweek for 80 percent of their normal salary would be benefitial for all three of economy, companies, and individuals. The professor in the lecture casts dout on the points made in the reading.
First, considering the article shorthening the workweek would provide benefits for the company. In contrast the professor in the lecture contradicts the idea and further explains that this policy would not affect company profit in the way reading suggests. The company should spend more money to hire new workers since they should pay the cost of the training new employees. Besides, fife benefits like medical benefits are the same for both four-day jobs and five-day jabs. In addition, by hiring more new employees, the company should provide more office space and more computers. These additional cost would cut into company profits quickly.
Second, The readings claims that the option of choosing a four-day workweek would result in decreasing the unemploymet rate. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes the information presented in the reading and makes the point that, as he aformentioned, hiring new workers is costly hence the company would go for another choice of and asking their employees to work overtime and expect them to the same amount of work expected from a five-day employee. Accordingly, not only would no additional job be created, but also current jobs would be more unpleasant.
Third, the auther in the reading passage puts forward the idea that it is better for the indivisuals to work four day a week. On the other hand, the speaker contradicts the idea and adds that by choosing this four-day job, though, individuals have more free time to invest in their personal life, the quality of their life would be reduced due to its high risk, low job security and less chance of advancing the job. The four-day workers are more prone to loose their jonbs during economic downturn. Furthermore, they would be passed over for promotions because the companies would prefer five-day employees for management positions in order to ensure continuous coverage and consistant supervision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ld provide benefits for the company. In contrast the professor in the lecture contradict...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 457, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... The four-day workers are more prone to loose their jonbs during economic downturn. F...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, then, third, in addition, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17403314917 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60808740242 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 145.348785872 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0841141903 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.866666667 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06452816374 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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