TPO18-Q1
none of the solution for saving torreya taxifoha that mentioned in the passage are not enough satisfactor solution. the torreya taxifoha is a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of florida that had started to die out. the first solution is unlikely to be successful because this microclimate is wetter and cooler than the surrouning region's relatively dry and warm climate and will be more dry by reestablish torreya in there. about the second solution by moving torreya to an entirely different location, far from its florida microclimate, torreya would be destroyed by human. the third solution in the passage is to preserve torreya in research center, this way is not solution either because these trees would not be to protect enough in this new environment however some scientists think that moving torreya in research center can protect the species torreya and this research can then be used to ensure the cotinued servival of the species.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: None
none of the solution for saving torreya taxi...
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...ge are not enough satisfactor solution. the torreya taxifoha is a type of evergreen...
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Suggestion: The
...of florida that had started to die out. the first solution is unlikely to be succes...
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Suggestion: About
...re dry by reestablish torreya in there. about the second solution by moving torreya t...
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Suggestion:
...r from its florida microclimate, torreya would be destroyed by human. the third s...
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Suggestion: The
..., torreya would be destroyed by human. the third solution in the passage is to pre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the cotinued servival of the species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1373.03311258 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 270.72406181 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0375 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.04702891845 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62552822066 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 145.348785872 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7729171989 49.2860985944 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.2 110.228320801 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517795086525 0.272083759551 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28207298445 0.0996497079465 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095964262572 0.0662205650399 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.517795086525 0.162205337803 319% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.3589403974 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.8541721854 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 63.6247240618 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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