tpo23
The text and lecturer offer two opposite views on the accuracy of hypothesis which illustrates the reasons of the yellow cedar decline. While the reading part presents some factors as the candidates of this incident, the professor counters these specific points and depicts some facts to put into the question for the reasons in the reading passage.
First of all, the lecturer disapproves the parasites cedar bark surmise, which in the reading part is named as one of the yellow cedar attackers. The professor states that the yellow cedar is one of most resistance species, because its healthy trunk is saturated with a chemical which is toxic for the insects. Whenever, the cedar barks attack these trees they will be die. Moreover, those trees attacked by the cedar barks are the old and sick ones. Thus, the barks cannot be responsible for this event.
Next, although in the text the brown bears and their claw and aggressive feeding habits are candidate as one of the reasons of this situation, the professor casts doubt on the truth of this claim. As the lecturer asserts the decrement are happened in the both main-land and island. While there are no any brown bears in the island, the population of the cedar in this zone is decreased too. Hence, the brown bear cannot be accountable for this situation.
Finally, the lecturer argues that there is the main decrement in the lower evaluation where has the warm climate. Meanwhile, in the reading part, the gradual changes of climate and cold weather considers as one of the factors of this event. According to the professor evidence, the decline takes place in the region with hot weather instead of the high spots with the cold weather.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hemical which is toxic for the insects. Whenever, the cedar barks attack these trees the...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...h main-land and island. While there are no any brown bears in the island, the popu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.261695866417 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.109375 0.158904122519 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08125 0.0723426182421 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.028125 0.0435111971325 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.009375 0.0277247811725 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14375 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.021875 0.0370669169778 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41670669688 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00625 0.0208969081088 30% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.190625 0.128158765124 149% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.009375 0.0158828679856 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.0114777025283 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1700.0 1645.83664459 103% => OK
No of words: 289.0 271.125827815 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88235294118 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314878892734 0.374372842146 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262975778547 0.287516216867 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18339100346 0.187439937562 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107266435986 0.113142543107 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41670669688 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.539623497131 95% => OK
Word variations: 50.7597399319 53.8517498576 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6428571429 21.7502111507 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9387364141 49.3711431718 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 132.220823453 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 21.7502111507 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.878197800319 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 46.9404349975 50.5018328374 93% => OK
Elegance: 3.0 1.90840788429 157% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.740725214327 0.549887131256 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.178309075084 0.142949733639 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0809841679609 0.0787303798458 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.68030078927 0.631733273073 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146253237334 0.139662658121 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.409208340293 0.266732575781 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110565728325 0.103435571967 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.579710691095 0.414875509568 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.028106106285 0.0530846634433 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.606408805162 0.40443939384 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117497443734 0.0528353158467 22% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.26048565121 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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