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In this set of materials, reading passage provide some evidences from dinosaur`s fossils. Although, it states that fossils present less actual data about animal’s tissue, it mentions to blood vessels, red blood cells, and collagen which they obtain these data from fossils of dinosaur; however, the lecturer provides some other hypothesis, which are contradicts with these evidences.
First of all, passage maintains that by examining the fossilized leg bone, they discover some soft substances between the bones that can be consider as blood vessels. To oppose this aspect the lecture mentions to some bacterial activities on animals tissues after their death, which provides some soft materials on the death bodies; thus, that soft tissues caused by bacterial activities.
Moreover, the lecture mention to red blood cell, which they got this point of view from existing of iron, which is a vital elements of red blood cell. On the other hand, the lecturer stated that other fossils which funded on that location contain the iron too; so, it cannot be the sufficient reason for this theory.
Finally, reading referred to a study which scientists performed study and concluded that they contained collagen. As the professor maintains that collagen can survive at least for one hundred years so it is impossible a tissue that aged for seventy million years can contain it; moreover, as he mentioned it is possible the collagen form scientists hand`s skin deliver to this tissue, that how it reject this view point too.
reading passage provide some evidences
the reading passage provides some evidences
which are contradicts with these evidences.
which contradict with these evidences.
Definitions of contradict
verb
deny the truth of (a statement), especially by asserting the opposite.
"the survey appears to contradict the industry's claims"
synonyms: deny, rebut, dispute, challenge, counter, controvert, gainsay
that can be consider as blood vessels.
that can be considered as blood vessels.
thus, that soft tissues caused by bacterial activities.
thus, that soft tissues are caused by bacterial activities.
the lecture mention to red blood cell
the lecture mentions to red blood cell
other fossils which funded
other fossils which are funded
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Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 245 250
No. of Characters: 1237 1200
No. of Different Words: 132 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.956 4.2
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
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