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Recently, there has been a tone of debate as the differences between endotherm and dinosaurs. More specifically, in regards to this passage, the writer of the reading passage puts forth the fact that the dinosaurs and endotherm were same. In the listening passage, the lecturer is quick to point out that there are some serious flaws with the author's claim. In fact, the lecturer believes that dinosaurs and endotherm were not the same and addresses, in detail, the troubles with each point made by the author of the reading text.
First and foremost, the passage states that base on the fossils discover in Polar Regions, these two species are the some professional in the same field, however, stand in firm opposition to this assertion. In the listening, for example, the lecturer states that this phenomenon could have happened because of the fact that dinosaurs migrated to so other places because the need much warmer place to live and also that could happened because of the fact that the hibernated there. she goes on by saying that this reason is not good enough to based in it.
One group of expert in the same field, represented by the author of the reading passage, thinks that dinosaur and endotherms were the same because of their legs position and movement. Of course not all experts in that field think this claim is accurate. Again, the speaker specifically addresses this point when she states that the reason that the position and movement of dinosaur’s legs is based on their weight and the fact that they were so huge. The position of their legs was based on the fact that they legs had to tolerate their massive body weights.
Finally, the author wraps his argument by positing that there were some connection between dinosaur and endotherms bone structure. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this point by contending that dinosaurs growth were decreased in the cold period of time and as a matter of fact they growth changed from rapid to slow and at the end they growth were rapidly and that specific structure help them to maintain their body temperature in the cold days.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...therm and dinosaurs. More specifically, in regards to this passage, the writer of the reading...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...olar Regions, these two species are the some professional in the same field, however...
^^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...hat this phenomenon could have happened because of the fact that dinosaurs migrated to so other places b...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ce to live and also that could happened because of the fact that the hibernated there. she goes on by sa...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... of the fact that the hibernated there. she goes on by saying that this reason is n...
^^^
Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'leg'
Suggestion: leg
...ir legs was based on the fact that they legs had to tolerate their massive body weig...
^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dinosaurs'' or 'dinosaur's'?
Suggestion: dinosaurs'; dinosaur's
...ssue with this point by contending that dinosaurs growth were decreased in the cold perio...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...saurs growth were decreased in the cold period of time and as a matter of fact they growth cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, so, for example, in fact, of course, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 361.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8836565097 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47867494183 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470914127424 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5134116835 49.2860985944 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.615384615 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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